Ai Ep. 10: Pretty Words and Honest Feelings
Ai decides she will write song lyrics for the next event for Misato and all of her Ai Pals. This is her first time attempting anything like this, and she finds herself struggling.
Ai
Hmmm… Is this any good?
Ai
This flows pretty well, right? I must've read a million books, and I did everything they said to… I think.
Ai
Then again… *Groan*
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Player
Ai! How are your lyrics coming along? Getting anywhere?
Ai
Whoa! Y-You scared me. Geez, do you have me bugged or something?
Player
Huh? Why do you say that?
Ai
Because your timing was WAY too good. But hey, that's fate, I guess. Anyways, as far as the lyrics go, I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing.
Player
What?!
Ai
I wasn't expecting much from my first attempt, but I gave it my best shot. But now I've gone over it so many times, I can't even tell if it's good or bad anymore.
Ai
So, I need your discerning eye to take a look at it for me!
Option 1: “Your handwriting's so small.” |
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Player Y-Your handwriting's so small! Ai I-It is? Sorry if it's hard to read! |
Option 2: “Your handwriting's so pretty.” |
Player Wow, Ai… You have really pretty handwriting! Ai THAT'S the first thing you notice?! Read the lyrics! |
Player
Hmm… Ai, have you been reading about how to write song lyrics?
Ai
Well, yeah, of course. I've never written lyrics before, so I hit the library and read a bunch of books.
Player
I had a feeling. My first impression is that it's not very you.
Ai
It's not me?
Player
Nope. I mean, as lyrics go, they're excellent. They flow well, and they get the message across. But despite all that, they don't really feel like your words.
Ai
Y-You think? I mean, I tried my best. I did my homework like I said, and listened to a lot of songs beforehand, too.
Player
You don't have to be overzealous, Ai. I'm sure all your Ai Pals want to feel things the way YOU feel them.
Ai
I-I did that. For my first draft, I just wrote down exactly what I felt inside. But it felt childish, like a diary or something.
Ai
It wasn't a real song like the ones the other school idols sing. That's why I thought it was no good.
Player
I'm not saying your approach was wrong, but I think what your fans truly want is to see the real you.
Ai
The real me? So, all I have to do is be myself?
Player
I think that's the most important thing. Take your feelings and write them down in your own words. No filters, no alterations.
Ai
I didn't want to let the Ai Pals down… Was it a mistake to be worried about them?
Player
Absolutely not! You were just going overboard trying to make it perfect, that's all.
Ai
I get you. I guess I was being kind of a try-hard there.
Ai
But that was blocking my real self from coming through, right? I've just gotta be blunt and upfront about my feelings like I usually am!
Player
Yeah. I'm sure that'll make the Ai Pals happy, too!
Ai
Got it! I'll go write some new lyrics. And this time, I'll do it my way!
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